Wednesday, December 5, 2012

Book Report



11th     NAME______________________________DATE ___________________
                                               
Book Report

Please take the book report seriously and do your best work to finish out this semester. This is the last part of your SSR grade.  You may choose your own topic but it needs to be pre-approved with me. TURN IN THIS PACKET WITH YOUR FINAL PAPER.

The topics you can choose from are the following (circle ONE):

TOPIC 1: 
Often characters show love and compassion towards others.  Analyze the compassionate actions of one or two characters.  What is the author suggesting we do differently in our own lives by following these examples?

TOPIC 2:
Motifs play a significant role in books.  Choose one motif, discuss how it’s used to create meaning, and analyze the author’s purpose for using it.

TOPIC 3:
Trace the change and transformation one of the main characters.  What are we supposed to learn about life from this character?

TOPIC 4:
There are moments of sacrifice in most novels. Analyze moments of sacrifice and discuss what we are supposed to learn about life from these examples?
Text Box: TOPIC 5:
Symbolism appears in many novels.  Analyze the author’s purpose for using symbolism.
REQUIREMENTS:
-          your typed literary analysis should be between  3-5 pages; you can’t do this well in less than that
-          Manuscript Rules – look at the rubric to format your document using Word. I will review formatting in class.
-          this will be written in 3rd person so using personal pronouns (he, she) to refer to characters is acceptable
-          FOR THIS PAPER DO NOT use “I” and DO NOT useYOU/YOUR”
-          Since this is a formal essay, DO NOT use contractions – they’re informal
-          write in the present tense and be consistent about it; characters in novels are considered living, breathing human beings
-          5 quotations (w/citations) from the novel (for maximum points).  Quotations should support your thesis.

SCORING: (100 pts. for the Final Draft)
DUE DATE: No later than: Friday, December 7th at the beginning of the period. 

NOTES ABOUT THESIS STATEMENTS

Keep these things in mind when writing a thesis statement:

1.                 A thesis is NOT the whole essay; a thesis is the main idea, often expressed in a single sentence. 
2.                 A thesis can also be thought of as the main argument of your paper
3.                 A thesis should NOT be a laundry list of your main points
4.                 It should merely set up the topic and give any general information the listener needs to know. 
5.                 Every topic paragraph should clearly support your thesis – create strong links that return to what you are explaining throughout your paper.

There are three kinds of thesis statements:

           
  1. SIMPLE: Usually more descriptive and generic in nature
SPECIFIC SUBJECT + SPECIFIC FEELING[S]/FEATURES[s] = THESIS

EXAMPLES:
·           The history of the United States is dominated by lust for money, possessions, and power.
·       Unexpecting, average people like Mrs. Dubose, Atticus Finch, and Link Deas all show the real meaning of courage without the supernatural powers or fancy costumes throughout the novel.


  1. INTERMEDIATE: Usually more complex; addresses the larger message/call to action
AUTHOR + VERB + CHARACTER/SYMBOL/THEME/DEVICE/ETC. + PICK FROM BELOW + POINT
to discuss, in order to, to examine, to relate, concentrates on, to trace,
to see if, to show [shows,] to prove [proves,] to determine, to explain,
to argue [argues,] to persuade [persuades]
EXAMPLES:
·         Harper Lee uses references to flowers as a symbol to prove that in times of despair one can always find beauty.
·         Harper Lee illustrates the theme of childhood innocence through her young characters to represent the fact that things are not always as clear as they may seem to be.



       3. ADVANCED: This developed thesis includes contrast and may use words like therefore or although. With this type of thesis sentence, you will want to include the part and whole.
EXAMPLES:
  • Though many people wait for an extraordinary person to stop injustice, Lee passionately argues it is the courageous acts of average people that change society for the better.
  • Ralph’s inability to lead exposes man’s inherent evil nature in the face of adversity.




Book Report   RUBRIC

 

 

 

Formatting: Presentation

Manuscript Rules:
name, course & class period, date, the first line, upper left corner
all margins set at 1 inch
there is a creative title, centered, w/blank line above and below
capitalize 1st, last, and all important words in title
title is not larger or in bold, underlined, no quotes, all caps., etc.
essay is double-spaced; no extra space between paragraphs
Times New Roman 12 pt. font for all text including title and heading
paragraphs are indented; 1 tab
page numbering
name (header) at the top of each page
5              all manuscript rules were followed (10)
4              one or two errors with manuscript rules (8-9)
3              a few errors with manuscript rules (7)
2              several errors with manuscript rules (6)
1              many errors with manuscript rules

 

Formatting: Research Skills

Proper Citation: (Hugo 38). – unless name is mentioned in intro. then use (38).
Passages that appear in Book Report text as less than 4 complete lines:
Introduced with a comma
enclosed in quotation marks
followed by proper citation (as above)
Passages that appear in Book Report text as 4 complete lines are more:
                Introduced with a colon
                NO quotation marks (unless you’re quoting dialogue then use single quotation marks)      
Double indented & single-spaced
                Followed by proper citation (as above)

5              ALL evidence is properly documented, spaced, punctuated, etc.
4              MOST of the evidence is properly documented, spaced, punctuated, etc.
3              SOME of the evidence is properly documented, spaced, punctuated, etc.
2              FEW pieces of the evidence are properly documented, spaced, punctuated, etc.
1              LESS THAN 3 pieces of evidence are properly documented, spaced, punctuated, etc.

 

 

Conventions

10            spelling, capitalization, punctuation are correct
                grammar and usage are correct

8              spelling, capitalization, punctuation are mostly correct
                minor errors with grammar and usage

6              several errors with spelling, capitalization, punctuation
                some grammar and usage errors are repeated in a few places

3              spelling, capitalization, punctuation errors occur often but the message remains clear
                many grammar and usage errors but the message remains clear
                some fragments & run-ons present

1              spelling, capitalization, punctuation errors occur often and interfere with the writer’s message
                grammar and usage errors occur often and distract from meaning
                many fragments & run-ons present


 

 

Content: Ideas/Support

20            5 effective/purposeful quotations are included
All integrated well and thoroughly analyzed and linked to the topic/thesis
16            4 effective/purposeful quotations are included – 1 may be ineffective
Most integrated well and thoroughly analyzed and linked to the topic/thesis
12            3 effective/purposeful quotations are included – 2 may be ineffective
Some integrated well and thoroughly analyzed and linked to the topic/thesis
8              3 effective/purposeful quotations are included –
Few integrated well and thoroughly analyzed and linked to the topic/thesis
4              2 or less effective/purposeful quotes are included –
2 or less integrated well and thoroughly analyzed and/or linked to the topic/thesis

Content: Organization

10            well-written introduction, including an opener and thesis statement adequately introduces the essay
                ALL topic sentences help to introduce/transition each body paragraph and refer back to the thesis
All  body paragraphs end with some type of clincher that analyzes the support & links back to thesis
well-written conclusion that leaves the reader with something to think about
                evidence of smooth, effective transitions between sentences, paragraphs, and ideas

8              introduction, including an opener and thesis statement clearly introduces the essay; may be awkward
                ALL topic sentences help to introduce/transition each body paragraph and refer back to the thesis - one may be awkward
All 3 body paragraphs end with some type of clincher that analyzes the support & links back to thesis; one may be awkward
conclusion attempts to leave the reader with something to think about
                a variety of transitions exist in and between paragraphs; pacing is developing

6              introduction introduces the essay; may be missing a component or unclear, or thesis may be more than one sentence
                MOST topic sentences help to introduce/transition each body paragraph and refer back to the thesis - one missing or
may not link back to the thesis
MOST body paragraphs end with some type of clincher that analyzes the support & links back to thesis; one missing
or may not link back to thesis
conclusion concludes the essay; may be missing a component, unclear/awkwardly written, or may not indicate a deeper meaning
                the transitions sometimes work

3              introduction is attempted but may need a lot of work
                A topic sentence helps to introduce/transition one body paragraph and refers back to the thesis; two may be missing or may
not link back to the thesis
A body paragraph ends with some type of clincher that analyzes the support & links back to thesis; two may be missing or
may not link back to thesis
conclusion is present but needs a lot of work
                missing or unclear transitions force the reader to make giant leaps

1              no introduction or no thesis statement
                no topic sentences are present to introduce body paragraphs or no topic sentences refer back to the thesis
no body paragraphs end with a clincher  or none of the clinchers link back to thesis
no conclusion
no transitions

Total ______/ 50 x 2=

Text Box: Final Percentage Grade (out of 100) = ______


                                                     

Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Updated SSR Count


Aguilera Brown: 179
Cabrera Gonzalez: 1065
Chihan Caballero: 780
Chung: 644
Enns: 190
Kim Han: 453
Kim Kim: 991
Kwak, Joo Hye: 484
Kwak, Joo Young: 996
Lee, T: 0
Lee, Haeun: 707
Lee, Lidia: 1204
Sosa Coronel: 1788
Su Tai: 1040
Volpe Von Horoch: 1100

Study Guide


11th Grade Study Guide
Be familiar with all of the following stories/journals.  How do they connect to one-another?  The test will not have any surprises.  What we covered in class will be covered on the test.  Yes, you need to be familiar with all the vocabulary (from units 1-8).
Literary terms/words

Myth
Tone
Maxim
Psychological effects of slavery
Natural and artificial aristocracy
Personal narrative
Race/racial identity
Paternalism
Themes
Man vs. nature
Individualism
Culture clash

Reading/Journals




Thoreau: from Walden and Civil Disobedience
Read pages 374-381.  There will be a quiz on Monday.

Journal 25: Nature and Self-Reliance by Emerson
Pages 364-367. Answer all of the following questions.  NATURE: What does nature bring to man? How?  How does nature "wear the colors of the spirit?"  SELF-RELIANCE: What does he dislike about society?  What does he promote about the individual?

Journal 24: Moby Dick by Herman Melville
Read pages 332-344.Give one quote to demonstrate Starbuck's opinion of Ahab. Explain.  Give another quote to describe Ahab's view on the world.  Why do you think the quote demonstrates Ahab's view on the world?  How does Ahab compare himself to the ship and the mast?  How does the story conclude?  Do you agree or disagree with a the conclusion.  Give one quote to support your argument.

Journal 23: The Civil War
Why was slavery such a big issue?  Why did Lincoln decide to go to war?  What were a few things you learned from the packet?  Give one or two quotes and explain them.

Journal 22: The Divine Purpose of Slavery Packet
How has the legitimacy of Christianity and the Bible been used to promote paternalistic attitudes towards slaves and the divine purpose of slavery?  Give at least 3 quotes from the packet to support your reasoning. 1 page journal.

Journal 21: The Fall of the House of Usher by Poe
Read the rest of the story, pages 299-308.  Then answer the following question with 3/4 page journal.  Describe Roderick's fantasy world/mental state with quotes from the story.  What are some details about the horror of the house?  What are the negative effects of isolation?  Give at least 3 quotes.

Journal 20: Rip Van Winkle by Washington Irving
Read pages 454-460 (end of story).  Then write a one page journal on the change in Rip's life. What is different?  What is his response?  How does this story show cultural shifts and development?  Use at least 3 quotes from the story. 

Journal 19: Rip Van Winkle by Washington Irving
Read pages 448-454 (the end of the third complete paragraph it says..., "and he fell into a deep sleep.") Then write a one page journal on Rip's demeanor.  How does he react to the people in his town?  Describe his relationship with his wife?  What kind of person is he?  Use at least 3 quotes from the story.

Journal 18: Due Friday Oct 19th William Apess
Read An Indian's Looking-Glass for the White Man page 477-482.  Cite at least three explainations or arguments that Apess makes to advocate equal treatment for white people and Native American people. How can this be applied to society today? 

Journal 17: Longfellow
Read pages 250-252 "A Psalm of Life" and "The Tide Rises, The Tide Falls" by Longfellow. Then answer the personal response question on page 255.Do we leave "Footprints on the sands of time" or does death erase all traces of our lives?  In a brief paper, contrast the views presented in the two poems. With which viewpoint do you agree? Why?

Journal 16: The Devil and Tom Walker by Washington Irving
Read pages 236-245.  Journal question:  Do you think Tom Walker's exchange with the Devil was lucrative (spiritually and financially)?  Why?  What was Walker's greatest flaw?

Journal 15: Briton Hammon Narrative
Read pages 419-424.  How did transatlantic trade (of slaves, servants, guns, etc.) impact Hammon's life?  What conclusions can you draw about Hammon? Who did he identify himself with culturally and socially?  Use at least 2 examples.

Journal 14 Jefferson
Read pages 342-349 (Letter to John Adams and Notes on the State of Virginia) in your packet.  Then answer the following questions 1. (Notes...Virginia) What is Jefferson's arguement against the aristocracy of the clergy? 2. (Letter...Adams)  Define a natural aristocracy and an artificial artistocracy? Explain the difference between the two.

Journal 13: Jefferson
The Declaration of Independence (read it).  What does it mean to be American according to Jefferson?  How did the declaration not apply to African Americans?

Journal 12: Racism
Why did racism form in the early colonies? 3/4 page journal

Journal 11: Wheatley Cont.
Read "To S.M....His Works," "To His Excellency General Washington," "To the Right...North America," and "To Maecenas" by Phillis Wheatley.  Also RE-read the first paragraph of the bio on page 366. Then chose two of her works of poetry and analyze how her African or Christian identity could have played a role on the overall tone and message of the poem.  Provide textual evidence (3 examples min.)

Journal 10: Phillis Wheatley
Read "On Being Brought from Africa to America, To the University of Cambridge, in New England, On the Death of the Rev. Mr. George Whitefield, and Thoughts on the Works of Providence" by Phillis Wheatley.  Also read the first paragraph of the bio on page 366. Then chose two of her works of poetry and analyze how her African identity could have played a role on the overall tone and message of the poem.  Provide textual evidence (3 examples min.)

Journal 9: Equiano
Read Olaudah Equiano's Narrative of the Life pages 351-360 and answer the following question.
What could be psychological affects of such an experience?  Give specific experiences of Equiano's.  What were negative and positive impacts of the slave trade?  (you define what negative/positive is).

Journal 8 Edwards
"Personal Narrative" by Johnathan Edwards.
Read the narrative and compare and contrast your faith with Edwards?

Journal 7: Franklin Savages of North America
After reading, write a 1 page journal on how Franklin compares Native American and European customs and culture.  What is Franklin's perspective?

Journal 6 Franklin
After reading The Way to Wealth and Remarks...North America by Benjamin Franklin pg 219-230.  Choose one of Franklin's maxims and critically disagree with it.  Maxims are general rules or principals that are held to be true.


Journal 5
Alvar Nunez Cabeza Vaca 29-36
Garcilaso de la vega 37-42
Read and answer the following questions:
1. What is the persepective of each explorer towards the place they were exploring/land?
2. How do Native American perspectives of life differ from the explorers.

Journal 4: August 10
HOMEWORK:  John Smith From General History of Virginia… From a description of New England…From New England’s Trials. Pg 44-59
How do Smith’s and Columbus’ attitude (tone) compare/differ?

Journal 3 Read Christopher Colombus "From Letter to Luis de Santangel Regarding the First Voyage. and From Letter to Ferdinand and Iswabella Regarding the Fourth Voyage.  pg 26-29

Journal 2 Read pgs 17-24 "The Iroquois Creation Story" and "Pima Stories of the Beginning of the World" and "The Story of the Creation."  Then answer in a 3/4 page journal... What is the tone of the story?  What specific words add to the tone? Explain your answer. 

Journal 1
 “The Earth on Turtle’s Back” by Caduto and Bruchac pg 22-23  
“When Grizzlies Walked Upright” Erdoes and Ortiz pg 24-25
“Navajo” Matthews pg 26-27
“The Iroquois Constitution” Parker pg 28-29
What tone do the authors have in respect to nature? How do the stories reflect their heritage, traditions, attitudes and beliefs?  How can you tell (use information from the text)? How do these creation stories differ from/relate to the Biblical creation story.


Unit 1
Approbation      assuage                                coalition               decadence          elicit       expostulate        hackneyed
Hiatus   innuendo            intercede            jaded    lurid       meritorious        petulant               prerogative
Provincial             simulate               transcend            umbrage              unctuous

Unit 2
Ameliorate         aplomb                 bombastic           callow                   drivel                     epitome               exhort
                Ex officio              infringe                                ingratiate             interloper            intrinsic                inveigh
Lassitude             millennium         occult                    permeate            precipitate          stringent              surmise

Unit 3
Abominate         acculturation    adventitious        ascribe  circuitous            commiserate   enjoin
expedite              expiate      ferment          inadvertent        nominal        noncommittal           peculate
proclivity              sangfroid             seditious              tenuous               vitriolic                  wheedle             

Unit 4 affable     aggrandize          amorphous         aura       contraband         erudite                 gossamer
Infer      inscrutable          insular   irrevocable         propensity          querulous           remonstrate
Repudiate           resilient                reverberate       scurrilous             sedulous              sleazy

Unit 5 amnesty autonomy           axiomatic             blazon   caveat   equitable             extricate              filch
Flout      fractious              precept                                salutary                                scathing               scourge                                sepulchral
Soporific              straitlaced           transient              unwieldy             vapid

Unit 6    anomalous          aspersion            bizarre  brusque               cajole    castigate              contrive
Demagogue       disabuse              ennui    fetter    heinous                                immutable          insurgent             megalomania                sinecure               surreptitious      transgress           transmute           vicarious

Unit 7 austere   beneficent          cadaverous         concoct                                crass      debase                 desecrate
Disconcert           grandiose            inconsequential                                infraction             mitigate               pillage
Prate     punctilious          redoubtable       reprove                                restitution           stalwart                vulnerable

Unit 8 acrimonious          bovine  consternation    corpulent            disavow               dispassionate
dissension           dissipate              expurgate           gauntlet               hypothetical       ignoble    Impugn intemperate   odium                perfidy                 relegate               squeamish  subservient                                susceptible